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FireDancer123
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since 2001-06-14
Posts 43
Virginia

0 posted 2001-07-13 10:42 PM


don't believe the words I say
while I slowly recall
things only important to you
your alleged agony is
irrelevant to me
sorry I forgot the truth

"If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz
"Eat drink and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Dave Matthews

© Copyright 2001 Kelly - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-07-13 10:47 PM



Being where I am from....I find this quite...
interesting!

Thank you!

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2001-07-13 11:16 PM




hugs, g

"sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.."  -demi moore

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2001-07-13 11:21 PM


LOL..well then...i posted more than that...but its not showing..!  

ok..so heres what i said..

"woohoo! i'm gonna make it a FIRE nite..!  i hope youve got more out there..!"


  

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 07-13-2001).]

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-07-13 11:27 PM




Quite interesting........
and the hints of bitterness make it touching

Thank you
*********************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
5 posted 2001-07-14 02:01 AM


this makes my teeth stand on edge and my jaw clinch...powerfully done!
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