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Hunger Pangs
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Hunger Pangs |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Silken gold hair falls Statuesque sweet shape clad green Nibbles round the ear Yellow stars promise Jade burgeoning love’s apples Bring bread and mayo Cool deep greenery Surrounds flesh cool, crisp, luscious Finger sandwiches |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
several senses and thoughts involved here   |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yum! now you have made me hungry!! Great images and play of word... a pleasure to the senses and the mind |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Very colorful poem........ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The jolly green giant's girlfriend? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh, I just had lunch, but I'm thinking maybe I ate the wrong thing now......this sounded much better than what I had. Fun one Lady On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Although I confused some of the words (like nibbles) and had to return and read again to get your poems true meaning...... I think anyway, it was written very creatively. And I do like the 5-7-5 style that you used. Delicious. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ This is just lovely~ I would have replied sooner .. but, you made me hungry, so I stopped to fix a bite to eat ! And that's the truth ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
works for me  Michael Auguste~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady In White- oh now that's just not fair...now i'm hungry! LOL great job on this! ~vicky |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
A tastee little treat, Where's the baccon, BLT's Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
add Vienna sausages and you have the perfect meal!  Anyone up for a picnic?? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yanno, this brought back memories of my Gramma and me when I was young. She fixed these little round sandwiches like pinwheels and although I hated sandwiches and do to this day, I ate those! Ah, thanks for the memory with this one, as it hit my ah bone. ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I am remiss in thanking everyone for joining the picnic... Virginia, you are so right, several levels, indeed.... Cpat...love playing on words and images...yes!... Thank you Waseem... Interloper...no... Gentle Spirit...just a light repast.... Bob...glad you found the 5-7-5 pleasing.... Marge! Spam? And you didn't invite me along?...Shame! Glad you enjoyed! Worked for me, too, Auguste! Vicky...my intent...your reading pleasure! Shadow...BLT's coming up! 'Deer...those pop-top cans are just the handiest things ever invented, no? Thanks! Mysteria, so glad this was a hit! Thank you! |
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