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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
Posts 104
Minnesota

0 posted 2002-03-26 10:35 PM


3/26/2002

I look in your eyes
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who no longer
Sees me as a friend.

I look in you soul
To find I’m looking at
A stranger
Who’s soul
Has drifted away from
Me.

I look at your shadow
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who’s shadow
Isn’t at my side.

I look in your heart
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who’s heart
Doesn’t love me.

I look at your shoulders
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who’s shoulders
Wont need me for
Crying on.

I look in your mind
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who’ll never
Again think about me.

I look at you
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who
I don’t know anymore.

By: Me


© Copyright 2002 Care - All Rights Reserved
LCBS
Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
1 posted 2002-03-26 10:46 PM


awwwww Im sorry....

I hope that you and your friend can work things out...

Great Poem...keep them coming...

~lisa

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