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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-03-04 06:17 PM

I don't know if this makes sense..my brain and my heart are sending mixed signals..

You are everyone's
Shoulder to cry on
Why should I be any different?
But I've come
To find myself
Wanting to see you in a different light
Perhaps you are a Knight
Sent to brighten
The darkest of my days
And take away
The enshrouding pain
With your delicate words
Your name constantly falls upon my lips
Yet I don't want you
To see me like this
In constant pain
Waiting...
Anticipating
The day when you too
Will be calling out my name...

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-03-04 06:21 PM

Kris....

Why am I always the first to respond...(I dont think I have very much of a life..) Anyway, this poem was very good, and I liked the emotions expressed in it...still waiting on my emails!

~Lisa

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2002-03-04 07:02 PM

Thanks Lisa and I finally emailed you!!

errr hopefully you read this..:P

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

3 posted 2002-03-05 10:08 PM

hmm this reminds me of someone..
But i am not going to go into detail.
Good job, a very well written poem.

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

4 posted 2002-03-07 12:07 PM

I liked this cuz it was pretty original, yet it still made perfect sense to me...I know someone like the person u describe here...excellent job, thanks for sharing it.

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~