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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Fade Away Fade away into black Close your eyes Get off the "right" track Fade away into black Your casual lies Your drug, your smack Fade away into black What are morals? Everything you lack Fade away into Black Capture souls Blank faces, just black Fade Away |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Wow, very cool. I like how the "fade away into black" repeats itself, you use repetition much better than I... Last time I tried that it just sounded annoying. LOL. I enjoyed it. Kielo |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
I Like...... why only one reply? poeple pass up the good ones eh?  I'm ready for death because I don't believe in it- John Lennon |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
OOO girl im glad i found this!! I needed a nice strong piece to get me started this mornin! Powerful  I enjoyed it lots (as usual) iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow i liked this one. great job  ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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