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Teen Poetry #5

My Angel In The Dark

inspiredpoetwriter
Member

since 2002-01-05

Posts 104
Minnesota

0 posted 2002-06-27 12:49 PM

Drest in black tall & sexy
My angel in the dark has come to
Protect me, sitting up i rach for him
My hand he takes gives it a kiss that
Sets me on fire i smile at him tell him
He my only soulmate.

He smiles back with that warm
Beautiful smile tells me that i'm his dove
Swimming in his heart that keeps him
Alive,kissing his fingers like a petel of a
Rose i say i love u angel in the dark,

Taking me in his arms i melt in
To his skin moving to his
Lips that send shivers down my spine
I look in his green sparkling eyes
They tell me he wants me needs me in
His world i answer to him i'm forever
Your dove girl.

Lighting a candel to reflect off our bodies
Unbiting his shirt i feel his heart beat i
Plant a kiss right on his heart he shivers
A little he takes his thum and lifts up
My chin,looking at him this man i
Might marry i'm happy he's here to share
This special night.

His cold finger tips brush over my neck
I giggle and tell him it tickels he says
Good that was my plan as i lay down to
Sleep i tell him dont leave he tells me
I wont my love dove i'm staying
By u for eternity.

©Ang

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

1 posted 2002-06-27 01:40 PM

Good write...

Is that about a bf you have/had?

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2002-07-06 01:19 PM

besides some miss spellings, and some missed punctuation, this is a very lovely poem. You have narrated your happiness so well.
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

sillywilly
Junior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 33
oklahoma

3 posted 2002-07-09 11:12 AM

I really, really, really like it. Good job!

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