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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2002-07-05 03:43 PM


"Don't be afraid"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Don't be afraid to cry
don't be afraid to cry
when the window to your soul is weeping
and you're a raincloud when you are dreaming
just take it with a smile
don't be afraid to cry

Don't be afraid to fly
don't be afraid to fly
because you have got the wings of a dove
your heart's the limit when it comes to love
let me see you up high
don't be afraid to fly

Don't you see what you've got if you just believe
everythings possible if you set your mind free
And I hope you didn't realize too late
that there is just no use in being afraid

Don't be afraid to laugh
don't be afraid to laugh
because the smallest grin can make your day
and make you feel home when your far away
just jump over the gab
don't be afraid to laugh

Don't be afraid...

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
sillywilly
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 33
oklahoma
1 posted 2002-07-09 11:02 AM


i really like it. the repeating of the lines in every stanza is very effective.
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