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BrokenAngel
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0 posted 2002-01-22 08:02 PM



Wind in your face
The feel of the power between your legs
The open road stretches out in front of you
Inviting you
The never ending sky line temps you
The ultimate temptress

You go down the stretch of road
Your recognized by every one that passes you
Your seen as an outlaw
Your seen as a lucky individual
The way you look determines your amount of respect

This is the life of a biker
They are seen as role models for the wild renegades of each generation
Or they are seen as outlaws
Ridding with no reason but to cause trouble
A biker’s life depends on one of two things
His bike
Or his family
And the one saying he lives by still rings true
“Live to ride, Ride to live”


---Night Angel

© Copyright 2002 Hannah Rochelle Garner - All Rights Reserved
CwboyAtHeart
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1 posted 2002-01-23 01:02 AM


This is an interesting one...  How there's 2 kinds of bikers, those who use being a biker to gain power over people...  And those who just do it because they have a passion for taking the road on a bike...  Very interesting things to think about, I guess we all take on life in one way or the other, huh?  Very cool, thaks for the read and makin' me think.  

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2 posted 2002-01-23 09:12 PM


I love it!!! So grand! Excellent description in this one my dear!

Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon

FoxXena
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3 posted 2002-01-24 01:50 PM


My uncle rides a motorcycle, and I want to ride one too someday!! Well done!
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4 posted 2002-01-27 12:05 PM


This was a really interesting piece Angel...i enjoyed it..i myself have never been on a motorcylce so i guess i've never thought of the experience in  the way that you described here so it definately made me think..thanks for sharing

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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5 posted 2002-01-31 09:58 AM


This adventure you portray sounds very romatnic   There are so few people these days, though, who do something just because they love it.  Who do it and not expect anything in return.  Sad, though..

I really enjoyed this.  I loved the description you used.  Very nice job

--Marie

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6 posted 2002-01-31 03:16 PM


The never ending sky line temps you
The ultimate temptress

I enjoyed this write. Thank you for shareing. As a mtbiker, I can understand the feeling. i relate. Well written.

Titus

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           -Groucho Marx

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