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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-11-08 10:57 PM

I just want to tell you...
I love you.

If tomorrow never comes, I love you.
If something should ever happen, I love you.
If you are ever hurt and need someone, I'll be that someone.
Because...
I love you.

If we never see each other again, I love you.
If the sun never rises, and we live in darkness, I love you.
If I ever experience the fear of being alone, I'll think of you.
Because...
I love you.

If you look to the stars, remember, I love you.
If you are ever alone, remember, I love you.
If you ever consider suicide, I'll make you reconsider.
Because...
I love you.

If you feel you can't go on, remember, I love you.
If you feel life isn't worth living, remember, I love you.
If you need someone to love or hold, remember me.
Because...
I love you.

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*
*If you ever need anyone to talk to feel free to l

[This message has been edited by Read_what_i_write (edited 11-08-2001).]

~gretchenp34~
Junior Member

since 2001-10-08

Posts 46
Ohio, USA

1 posted 2001-11-08 11:08 PM

aaawwwwwwwww the poem is so.....loving!!! it makes me feel all warm inside bc that is so good that we actually care for other people and everything!!!! thats a good poem, and i hope this love of yours gets to see the poem that is all about them bc it is so sweet!!!

Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart.

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-11-09 01:50 AM

I think you did a great job of spacing out your repetitions by the end of the stanza so it didn't get overworked. This poem is very sweet and anyone would love to recieve it!

Theo

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-11-09 02:43 AM

You did a great job in expressing yourself. I think you really feel a lot for this person and I wish the best of luck.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-11-09 10:04 AM

Sounds like your heart is completely dedicated to this certain individual...sounds to be someone of a special person...i think you expressed yourself nicely and they are lucky to have your love

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2001-11-09 03:27 PM

Very sweet poem. You can tell how strong your feelings are for this person. Great job
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

6 posted 2001-11-09 06:21 PM

I like reading happy poems because I never write any of my own. You definitely have a great deal of love for this person, and you expressed that so well. I hope that they get to see this. Great job!

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-11-10 02:21 AM

beautiful writings from a beautiful heart...

I enjoyed this very much

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

8 posted 2001-11-10 08:08 PM

AWWW SEA i love you .. and thank you ~!

you made me smile~!

muah

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

9 posted 2001-11-10 09:18 PM

Aww..(most overused word of the year) So much love in this poem, you can feel it flowing... It seems to be tied in to your emotions well, which makes it very good, you care for this person more than words can describe, yet somehow you managed to describe it in words. This was great.

Don't Drink and Park!
Accidents may cause People!

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

10 posted 2001-11-11 03:45 AM

Thats just about the sweetest thing ive ever read! Im so glad i read it... This was fabulous... Thankz...

ALLIE

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2001-11-11 10:09 AM

well now I'm all warm and smiley cause I made you smile

it really is beautiful, I really like the style you write in, it's very cool.

(((hugs)))

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

12 posted 2001-11-11 07:50 PM

This is one of the sweetest poems I have ever read I really like it.You have a very special talent for writting poetry keep up the great work.
Lauren

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