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BlackDove Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 18Why are you reading this??? |
Maybe the time is right to tell it all like it is And now that I feel god like there's nothing that can't be kissed The name of a lonely soul is scratched into my brain He thought he was king creole Until he found out, until he found out He sits upon a throne He lives a sleazy lie But he's all alone again, again I can see a liar, sitting by the fire Trouble in his heart, laughing at the thought Coming as he goes into overdose I wonder what he thinks of me? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
 Welcome to Passions!! Oh wow! What a fantastic first post. I've got so much out of this especially the last bit. I hope you like it here and reply as well as post. Please check your email for a special message.  anonymousfemale - moderator/Passions in Poetry "I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to Passions, and I like your entrance here. Wonderful to have you here and looking forward for more. Charisma |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Well, I don't normally come around much, but as I was browsing around this forum I saw your screen name and thought I'd check it out. Did you get it from a Tori Amos song? I forget what it's called. I love Tori Amos so if you did then claps for you for having good taste.  But if you didn't it's cool anyway. So anywho, welcome to Passions... I'm sure you'll love it here. Just make yourself at home. P.S. - Loved the poem... very interesting. There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for. [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 10-14-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Welcome to Passions in Poetry. I do hope you enjoy this place as much as we all do Enjoy reading and sharing your own work as well You first post has left me speechless Your style in writing is totally different from the rest I loved the read and would love to see more thanks for sharing hi Sweets/puff puff/bubbles  , Lizzy , Jesa  , Ina  , Allysa  , Marie  , Cherish  , Jenn  , Minna  , Chelsea  , Leah  , Kimmie  , Ashley  , Smurfy  , Alexia  , Kamie  , Kari  , Nan  , Sea  , Javi  , Zu  , Lml  , Albertia  , Linc  , Jesse  , [This message has been edited by acire (edited 10-15-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was a poem really well written. I loved how it was done. A style to admire, in my eyes. I am also trying to write like that lately. You seem to do it very well. I hope to see more of your poems soon. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very cool poem, keep on writing cheers' -CM |
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BlackDove Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 18Why are you reading this??? |
No this is NOT from a song or artist of any kind! I got kicked out last time I did that All the plastic people who live without a care.Try to sit around my table and never bring a chair... |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
hahahaha..."Welcome to PIP" As if you need a second..*erm*..n/m. Anyways! Good poem, buddy! I like it..especially the last stanza. Keep on writing..*erm*..typing? :P *hugz and all that nonsense* _o0o_Anna_o0o_ *waves* Friends are angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly. |
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