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CLBinLOVE
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2001-10-15 10:08 PM


pardon me, while i go insane
a year ago
i never thought wed be
2 teenagers deep in love
but now i see
that it comes with the territory
the best two years of my life
i need you here,
i need you with me
take your hand
touch my cheek and i explode
more love than i thought possible
i just melt
so pardon me while i go insane
never can get enough of you
and so im gonna go insane
so pardon me while i go insane
pardon me
since you ive never been the same
not two days ago,
i took a look
into your eyes
and i thought
i can relate, to how much she loves me
i thought i knew how much you needed me
but since last nite
i know its soo much different
i know its soo much more
not what i thought before
so pardon me while i go insane,
never can get enough of you
and now im gonna go insane
because i need you
and you cant be here
so pardon me while i go insane


look familiar?  wrote it to an incubus song, pardon me, its a good song, but i changed the words around alot, and some other things too, just to make it all look good, to my girlfriend


"as below so above and beyond i imagine
drawn beyond the lines of reason
push the envelope, watch it bend"
--Tool

[This message has been edited by CLBinLOVE (edited 10-15-2001).]

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Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

1 posted 2001-10-15 10:11 PM



Wow Craig...
I don't know what to say
But you don't know how great it feels to hear you need me.....
I love you
Bel

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