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mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-10-07 10:23 PM

ok this isn't one of my best but oh well...

If I had to run until the end of time
If I had to crawl a thousand miles
If I had to swim though a hundred rivers of ice
To find myself climbing a million sky piercing mountains
Just to reach your arms
And taste your kisses,
Know my love, I would go anywhere, to any lenght,
For you.
The world could end
And mountains could crumble
And the sky could fall
Taking my last breath away
And I would still love you.
When forever merges with eternity
It still wouldn't be enough
To show you the extent of my love
And when my time here on earth runs out
I'll still be loving you.

Life is an open book with many unwritten pages, write something that's meaningful to you there.

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

1 posted 2001-10-08 01:33 AM

That's really sweet angel

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-10-08 02:59 PM

It's a very Sweet poem and great work

Hope to see more of your work soon.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2001-10-08 11:39 PM

Oh I like. Very very good!

If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

4 posted 2001-10-09 02:37 AM

i know the feeling...hopefully your's is returned...

me

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

5 posted 2001-10-09 04:00 PM

good poem! i think i know how you feel but its kinda hard to explain. like to hear more from you! ~Jess~

~*~How can we be friends if everytime I think of you I know that's all we'll ever be~*~

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

6 posted 2001-10-10 03:47 AM

this is really good and so sweet.

"by takeing no risks you are really risking everything"
Vic's RE book

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-10-10 12:29 PM

What a beautiful piece you have written here, mistic. Whoever you have written about seems very special and I hope they know how much they make you happy.
Thanks for sharing and be sure to post more.

~AF~

"I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you"
Nelly Furtado - On the radio

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