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luckyducky_505
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0 posted 2001-10-04 09:36 PM


I wrote this because I am goign through a really hard time and instead of crying constantly, like I have been doing, I would rather write.
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You are my best friend,
Or are you?

You flirt with me when Leah's not here,
But when she is you don't even come near.

I grab your {edit}
You grab mine,
I love joking around with you,
With your hand in mine.

But the next day you hardly say a word,
I guess you don't want to loose that tird.

I don't like her but for you I act,
I wish you would let me kick her {edit}

I'm sorry but I can do this no more
It's time you choose, me or that boar.

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If Jonathan or Leah either saw this my butt would be dead, so shhh!! LOL!! I guess I still love him and I am in the angry phase!!




Smile -- because you never know who's falling in love with it.

When you dream you imagine and when you imagine you dream!!

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-05-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany L. McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-04 09:42 PM


while I understand you are going through an emotional upset, I urge you to edit your post. The grabbing boobs comment and the a_ _
needs to be revised. using blanks to disguise a curse word - doesn't and it's not allowed. Thanks, SEA

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2 posted 2001-10-05 09:48 PM


I waited for you to get this, figured you were busy so I handled it for you  
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3 posted 2001-10-07 02:02 PM


I know how you feel, some people are so two-faced and react so different when they are around other people, I hope you are ok  
It is by the way a very good poem.

Zu

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stace_co2003
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4 posted 2001-10-09 03:42 PM


that is a good poem, but some of it almost goes into the too much information category. ALMOST. I say almost because it is a poem, and a poem is a very personal thing. so, I understand, and I'm here for you if you ever need someone to talk to.

I'm not as drunk as some tinkle peed I am!

Don't frown, you never know who is falling in love with your smile. :)

katherine
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5 posted 2001-10-10 03:37 AM


this is a really good poem but not a great situation. If the guys doing this with you while he's with her then if you got him he's proberly do the sae thing to you. Is this guy really worth the heart acke. I know it's hard but if i was you i'd walk away.
good luck with it.

"by takeing no risks you are really risking everything"
Vic's RE book

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6 posted 2001-10-10 12:27 PM


Grrr..guys this like make me furious! Have you ever thought maybe he is playing around with both of you for a laugh? There are some morons out there that actually want to do that. Sad, yes but not uncommon.
It's good to see you getting your angry emotions out here instead of beating him to death.  

Take care and thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you"
Nelly Furtado - On the radio

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