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Teen Poetry #5

Crossed Paths

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2001-09-21 01:07 PM

I worked hard to gain your trust   just to be rejected,
Frequently ignoring me   what skill you have perfected.
I sit sometimes and wonder   why you do the things you do,
Can’t you see the pain in me   I feel lonely too.
Weekend after weekend alone in my own life,
Awakened by my screaming as you stabbed me with the knife.
Our paths were crossed at one time  I’m glad you were my friend,
But now I feel that our forked paths   will bring that to an end.
Once more I find an empty path   with naught but my blue pen,
And I stay tall though I fall   and hope our paths do cross again.

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
- Godsmack

"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
-unknown

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-09-21 04:40 PM

Very strong words here. Well done on the poem Kaos, I'm looking forward to more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

2 posted 2001-09-21 06:39 PM

you know what...i could have swore this was my poem...cuz every word pertains to me and Jeremy...the weekends...the way i feel...
omi..im gonna lose my cool...very nice write!!!!!!

"I swear officer! It was PINK."

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-09-22 03:50 AM

Michael, nice write. You've expressed yourself well with some really heartfelt lines in there too.

well done. thanks for sharing.

~AF~

Please put waste in a bin
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katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

4 posted 2001-09-23 02:06 AM

this i great it hits you hard(if that makes any sense) i like the way it flows. well done keep it up.

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