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0 posted 2001-09-19 02:33 PM


We met a rainy afternoon in spring
Never been this happy before
There wasn’t anyone or anything
That could tear us apart
At list that’s what I thought

No time for tears
No time for self hatred
Gotta get over this.
It’s nothing but a heartache.

Now I think about you all the time
How we used to laugh together
My heart is crying all day and night
Memories last forever,
But nothing beats the real thing.

No time to cry
No time for loneliness
Gotta get over this,
It’s nothing but a heartache.


© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-19 04:20 PM


hey! I really enjoyed this poem.
keep up the good work!

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keoni
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2 posted 2001-09-19 05:56 PM


This was a nice poem. I enjoyed it.
Jon

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