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Your deffinition of love
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Your deffinition of love |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Your words,"I love you." were they real and true If so I have some questions for you What is your deffinition of love,what do you think My heart is in so much pain, its starting to sink How can you say I love you by knowing me just one day Why did I belive everything that you say? Did your deffinition change when you kissed anothers lips? My heart is in agony my heart tears and rips Was your deffinition,"I love you, but Iam going to cheat?" Your words were never true, they all sounded sweet Love impared me to see Love impared my reality Why? why would you say it if it was never true? The situation has intageled me and i dont know what to do Did you still love me after you decived? I feel so stupid, for how long I belived Anger still within me deep Promises you made, but you could never keep It makes me angery that I keep geting treated this way Why did I belive everything you say? You tell me baby ive changed all for you You tell me these words, But are they true Youve lied many times and got away with few I dont want anymore pain from you Your deffinition of love is, well you never had one You didnt care you were using me, it was all games and fun Looking me in the eye telling me your innocence All of your words becomes scrambled they make no sense Its like your talking but I cant hear each of your lies with words bring me a tear You say just belive you, but how can I? You say belive you, I cant beacause you lie The moment you lied, was the moment my heart died The moment you decived my love for you was the moment my heart broke in two Leave me alone no more pain go away Why did I belive everything you say? |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
OK first off, I really liked the poem. It was great! But "deffinition" is spelled "definition"...sorry to sound snotty and correct you, its just the repetition of the word threw me off of the poem. But trust me i liked it. ALot. Do you believe in love at first sight? If not I can walk by again! |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"Why? why would you say it if it was never true? The situation has intageled me and i dont know what to do" "Anger still within me deep Promises you made, but you could never keep" Awesome display of emotions here. I know how ya feel...So frustrating! Thanks for the read! Much enjoyed! United we stand, Divided we fall. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
what a so and so.  It hurts like hell when you find something like this out but (i'm saying this a lot) you'll grow with the experience and become a nun. Ok, no you won't but you'll grow from it. Deception and lyings SOBs like this aren't worthy shedding tears over. Hope you'll be alright and take care of yourself.  ~AF~ "Who needs enemies, |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Man, I hate to see people hurt so much I just hate it Hope things do pick up for you This guy surely doesn't deserve someone like you Your prince will come some day *hugs* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
I enjoyed reading your emotions. Keep your head up. As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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