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a.k.a.maLa
Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 15
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-09-07 06:32 PM



What rhymes with this
What rhymes with that
I know, I know!
Whoa-look at that

I think I'm a poet
But I don't really show it
Coz I write crappy poems
Like this and you know it

I call myself an artist
But I'm really just retarded
So maybe if I just rhyme a lot
Like Dr. Seuss just farted

Oh, my God, look at me
I'll try to be deep
Like why is the sky blue
Why can't the blind man see

So basically what I'm trying to say
Is that you pseudos are funny everyday
Whoa-whoa-whoa-ya-ya-ya
I need a thesaurus to look up intellectuali-tay

© Copyright 2001 Jenna - All Rights Reserved
pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
1 posted 2001-09-07 08:24 PM


hehehe...thanx, i needed that

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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
2 posted 2001-09-07 08:25 PM


aren't you funny  
this is clever  

Ina
Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
3 posted 2001-09-07 08:52 PM


this was very intersting, in a good way.


Regina

MindlessPoet
Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106
Texas
4 posted 2001-09-08 12:34 PM


hah, that's too cool  

For now, all I can do is dream.

peachesNcream
Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
5 posted 2001-09-08 12:38 PM


That was really funny! haha..write more!
anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
6 posted 2001-09-08 02:54 AM


Good piece. It's a nice break from all the heavy and lovey dovey stuff in here. I enjoyed it.  

"Oh, my God, look at me
I'll try to be deep
Like why is the sky blue
Why can't the blind man see"

Nice job and thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

Spice
Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.
7 posted 2001-09-08 03:07 AM


Charming. HaHa

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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