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fractal007
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0 posted 2001-09-08 12:02 PM


We dreamed our dreams of pow'r and might below
The stars, when things once mattered in our minds.

I heard the sound of night, the music that finds
The heart and soul and lifts them from the low
And darkened valleys of mind, and then unwinds
Their coils of modern day to free me now.

We sang our songs of future things to come
And thought of worlds that soon would be our plains.

I watched the slow, steady silent wanes
As light was dimmed.  The sky would soon become
The enemy of dreams, a source of pains
Reminding me of life forgotten to come.

We dreamed.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2001-09-08 02:51 AM


Oustanding work, Frac. Some great images in this and it is a killer piece.

Thanks for posing and keep writing.  

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

anonymous albert ?
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2 posted 2001-09-08 01:20 PM


...the imagery was GREAT!...i like the tone within this piece.


[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 09-08-2001).]

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