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Certain person (long very long) |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC 
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Did you ever feel like the world was ending...B/c of one confusing feeling that you can't describe? Have u ever been torn apart and not wanted to be put back together b/c of a certain person? B/c that person makes u feel so good but at the same time it makes u hurt so bad? I wonder if you have ever felt the same way I do... Does everyone get this feeling? And when u see a certain person's s/n on your buddy list...do u get all warm inside but on the outside you are shaking with fear? Do u sit there and stare at that person's name wondering what they are thinking...wondering if they even care? Have u ever just sat and waited...waited for them to talk to u... waited for happiness? I wonder, did you ever listen to a song... that maybe reminded u of this certain person...and u listened to that song over and over until the night grew old. And in the morning you would still hear the harmony of the beautiful voices in your head? ...Reminding you about that certain person once again. When you see that certain person in that hall at school does ur stomach twist and turn?...Does your heart start to ache...and do you wonder if they will even notice u are there? And when they smile and squeeze your shoulder...all of your insides just float. Do u feel like you are in heaven on a cloud...and you can't help but to make the biggest smile...then ur heart suddenly seems to be put back 2gether? Then do u walk back down the hall realizing that the certain person is only a certain person...and do u remember that night they told u that u were only a friend in their heart? Suddenly do u feel like ur insides start to fall to the floor, your stomach starts to ache, and ur heart is torn once again...those beautiful voices of harmony are now loud and annoying and they won't go away? And as ur walking... walking, walking...does it feel like the longest walk you have ever had? Do u feel like the day will never end and these horrible feelings won't go away? So then when the day is finally over ur sitting at home ...looking at that certain person's name on your buddy list... remembering that they are only a certain person? Then do your insides finally start to rise from the floor but once again your heart starts to ache...the sounds from the song aren't coming in clearly and you feel like crying...B/c that certain person said hey? U stare at that certain person's name...and you start to wonder...why? Do a trillion questions start to build up in your mind and it confuses you b/c u know they cannot be answered? Then at night when everything is quiet and still do you lay in your bed...looking at the ceiling...wishing and questioning about that certain person...? Does this certain person always make you feel like this? Am I the only one...the only one who feels like dying...the only one whose heart gets torn out of place...the only one who listens to a song that sometimes sounds perfect but other times it sounds like someone dying? Do you have a certain person...a certain person that makes you get beautiful butterflies in your stomach...a certain person that makes you see the world in a much better way than anyone else...but at the same time this certain person rips ur heart and shreds it into millions of pieces that are too hard to put back together...? I wonder if my certain person has a certain person...and I wonder...could their certain person be me? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Andrea!  WOW! This is MOST DEFINETLY my FAVORITE of all your posts so far. It was long, but rawly emotional. No meanings hidden deep within symbolism...Everything you thought and felt was just out there- openly- complete raw form. I related to this SO much it's just uncanny. My eyes watered up in a few parts... This was absolutely awesome. You had some incredible thoughts in here, Loved the ending too. Damn girl! You really impressed me! I'm adding this to my library...It's very rare that someone writes ME...So I'm holding on to this. Thanks for the read!  You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You've expressed your thoughts and feelings in a really wonderful manner. I enjoyed the read much considering it's length. Thanks for sharing Keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
 this is one cool poem...though not too long.~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Holy moly!! *claps* This is brilliant, Andrea! I LOVE IT! All the time I was reading it, all I could think about was my certain person. It's strange how you think you can hate a person so much yet they are the certain person. Wow...this is my favourite from you too. This one holds so much more emotion than your others and really shows your talent. You have a knack for just running pieces like this. I would really like to see more of this style from you. Wow...library definitely. Keep writing and never stop sharing.  ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Simply outstanding! i don't have much to say but that.....wowness.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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