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Punk Angel
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

0 posted 2001-08-28 12:48 PM

im so torn
im ripped apart
now i can feel
this hole in my heart

maybe we shouldnt have met
but the sparks were so hott
i thought i was over you
it turns out im not

you decided this couldnt go on
you realized the sky wasnt so blue
but what you didnt realize
is you tore my heart in two

please realize i love you
and dont make it a crime
i know it was wrong
ending it those other times

i know we are now
the best or friends
but i cant go on like this any longer
or our friendship will end

you know why i ended it
and i said id wait for you
and you told me you loved me
but i guess it wasnt true

dont give me any more excuses
i dont want any lies
no false reasons
no false ties

why just yesterday you told her
that you still loved me
so where are we now
where does this lead

im so confused
i want to hide
from all these stoys
what if theyre lies?

i wrote this poem like, 2 weeks ago and i juss now got the nerve to post it!!!

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??
~*Krista*~

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

1 posted 2001-08-28 02:37 PM

I really liked this poem you did a good job . this is the first poem i have read of yours and i love it! Very good write keep it up!

Andrea

*You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun!

*gurls are sweet, Gurls are nice, but im the gurl with whip cream and ice

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-08-28 03:58 PM

I'm so sorry you are hurting like this, hopefully you can talk this out with your love. Your emotions were expressed very well

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-08-28 07:06 PM

this was awesome! i got the same problem (except for the whole ending it many times before and the guy telling the friends that he loves me) hahaha i guess that makes up the basics of the poem tho right? LOL anywho... good write... i loved it.

Valerie

"i'm supergirl, and i'm here to save the world, but i wanna know, who's gonna save me" - WNBA Commercial

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2001-08-29 04:15 PM

wow, kris i REALLY liked this one alot. even tho it was sad, sad's my specialty so of course i liked it, awesome job.

death is certain, life is not
Have u ever loved somebody so bad, u cry when u aren't around them, and still miss them when u r with them?~me

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 08-29-2001).]

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-09-01 03:18 PM

*pops you*
JUST now posting the poem? Shame on you! HeHe
I thought it was awesome. I can relate bunches! It's so sad... *Hugs ya* Don't be sad...

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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