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sorrowfulangel
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 59
Memphis,TN

0 posted 2001-08-23 01:19 AM

softly,raindrops tap against my window
the gentlest of lullabyes making me feel dimmer
farther away
a sky so dark even the luminious moon was drowned
beneath it's sable coat of clouds
with eyes to the heavens,i search through it's depth
the trace of a smile playing on my lips
for i have learned
that after every raging storm
a rainbow is sure to arise

"god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways"

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

1 posted 2001-08-23 01:23 AM

Great Post! I like it alot

"Nothing will stop me, and whether I'm here or wherever I may be, I'll always have the same feelings, I'll say what I feel." ~Lennon

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-08-23 03:34 AM

Powerful poem I loved it!
Lauren

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

3 posted 2001-08-23 06:46 AM

Best ending!! WOW!!

Really liked this one... Great imagery!!

Short and to the point!

G'work

ALLIE

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

4 posted 2001-08-23 10:49 AM

Very nice imagery in this piece. The ending was good.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-08-23 08:00 PM

Nice words of wisdom at the end.
The description was wonderful- It painted a beautiful picture in my head.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-08-23 09:19 PM

for i have learned
that after every raging storm
a rainbow is sure to arise
this brought a smile to my face..i enjoyed this a lot...thanks for sharing!

Piece you life together and you WILL find holes.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-08-24 11:59 PM

Hey this was really good. I thought you did awesome on the poem. Well done here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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