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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. 
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I'm not the strong girl that you think you see. I often look out my window seeing the wonderful things around me. That I cannot be. So, I cry myself to sleep almost every night. Wishing and hoping to be that star in the dark blue sky, so out of sight. But then sometimes I don't feel as smart as the rest of you all. So I dream of being oh so tiny and really really small. Sometimes I want to escape all these tragic tragedies. So I dream that one morning I shall awake with no worries. But until that day comes, I'll be sitting here all alone. And hope that one day... I will be unknown.. *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this very much....I know about wanting to be unknown.....this is very well done  |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Thanks alot, Raven. Bum me out more than I already am. HeHeHe- Just kidding. I really liked this piece. I thought you expressed yourself very well. I know those feelings.... Great write here! You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh wow.. very sad. This was very well written, RS. I enjoyed this a lot. I hope all is well, and you feel bettr Nicely done. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this. You did quite well on it. Very well done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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