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To leashed to be young
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To leashed to be young |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
i was just releasing sum pent up anger in me, so if u dont like, thats ok, it wasnt written 2 show itself off Being leashed, against everything, I've ever loved. music, GuYS, feelings, ThoughTs, Decisions.... Everything I'll ever need and LovE.... TAKEN from me... Why? because I'm a teenager. teenagers nowadays have been, deprived of the freedom we want so badly. No smoking! no SWearing! You Can't Wear THAT! NO!YOU'RE to younG!DON't LIe to ME! you can't listen to that , you're to young! well screw that!why isn't my generation allowed to do all the crap your's could???!! this is So STUPID! don't tell me who I can or can't hang out with! and yes i will listen to whatever kind of music I want! And if I'm to young, then that makes YOU to OLD! I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....i'm outta touch.......-Linkin Park |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
good release of emotions here, very powerful voice here Life is an open book with many unwritten pages, write something that's meaningful to you there. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I love your poem because I feel the same way you do about everything you expressed in your poem.It's not fair that our generation can't do the same things our parents could do.SO I pretty much do what i want because no one really has control over me except me.But anyway I loved your poem and keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
thanks 4 the replies, i appreciate them. i was really mad when i wrote this so it might've came out wrong.  I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....i'm outta touch.......-Linkin Park |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Obviously releasing a little anger. I liked it. Great way to end the poem Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I'm w/ Mistic no this one. VERY powerful voice here...In some points I agree with you...but most definately not all. But anyway... Thanks for the read. Wonderful display of emotions. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
An interesting free verse. I did not find the spelling to be all that impressive, however, the rest of it makes up for that. This is a very well done casual poem. I think that "their generation" had the same problem. Youth are always trying to be defiant. The only thing is that being defiant has the price of oppression. When one tries to press against the natural order of things one inevitably feels the current pushing against one's self. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I agree with ^^ those replies. Very powerful tone here. I thought it was very unique... this is different than a lot of the poems I read. That makes it really stand out. Although I don't quite agree with some of the things you pointed out, I think that you did a nice job here. Some may look at this as your average venting poem.. hmm.. I say it's more than that. more poetic. I really liked the beginning, and ending. VERY strong!  Nicely done!--Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
i like the way you wrote what you feel/felt .. very powerfull!!! *You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun! |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
Wow... been here everyday of my life! lol... Great way of getting it out is to write about it! And you did a good job at writing hope it got the anger out! g'work ALLIE |
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