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the_rescue
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0 posted 2001-08-08 05:59 PM



What's wrong with the pick up line
I mean so what if I think your fine
would you rather me act like an idiot
in a way that you would rather forget

So what if I ask if your feet hurt
did you fall from heaven land in the dirt
I lost my way home can I go with you
I'm Looking place to stay what do you want me to do
I mean would you rather have me freeze in the cold
when I could have you in my arms to hold

Oh wait that's cheesy right just another line
I mean what if I truely wanted you to be mine
So what if I lost the number for my phone
maybe after a while I can call yours my own
Is this just to hard of a thing to ask
Is this ceasing of nagging an impossible task
Oh well I guess I'll keep my lines to my self
Maybe right a book and put them on a shelf.

I mean right guys we try to make the girl smile
and they tell us to take a hike walk another mile
unappreciative I tell you nothing more nothing less
this whole pick up line thing has caused us a mess
Hey I guess they never know what they will miss
because as the Ole Hammer said you can't touch this.

Hmmm quote for me is as follows:
Stupid CUPID stop pickin on me lol

The Rescue

sorry robin had to do it again


we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us

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1 posted 2001-08-08 07:02 PM


grrrrrrrr jimmy! silly boy! oh well..... i knew you would do it sonner or later haha i miss you get back on yahoo some time so i can talk to ya! love ya!
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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2 posted 2001-08-08 10:03 PM


Uh oh... here we go again!  Cute!  I enjoyed this.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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3 posted 2001-08-09 01:01 AM


Oh no....haha how fitting to bring this back up. Good luck in the battle of the sexes again.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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4 posted 2001-08-09 01:21 AM


haha seriously jimmy i just brought it out because the pick up lines started again lol!
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

allie
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5 posted 2001-08-09 04:58 AM


Lol,
i liked that post a lot...

I don't mind pick up lines either... im one of the few who laughs and then brags to her friends! lol *i still think like a 10 year old i know*

Anyway very very nice write,

ALLIE

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6 posted 2001-08-09 11:21 AM


Hey i thought it was great.  Even though guys don't use pick up lines on me.  Great for me!  Hope to read more of your posts.

**Sarah

cutie2005
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7 posted 2001-08-09 07:10 PM


Hey i liked it.. and I like pick up lines.. Ya they might be a lil chessy but they can really make a person just smile when haveing a bad day!!!!
   Nice
Always,
   Amanda

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!



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8 posted 2001-08-09 11:47 PM


cute  

You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights

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9 posted 2001-08-10 08:22 AM


dun dun dunnnn.... it's back again...lol
katherine
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10 posted 2001-08-11 01:44 AM


pick u lines ae a cack

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