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DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

0 posted 2001-08-08 12:49 PM

--I know this isnt good compared to other stuff ive written so no need to remind me

**Goodbye**
Captivated in your arms
lost somewhere between
my dreams and reality
moments like this
I will treasure forever
When time takes us afar
and your smile
no longer brightens my day
your eyes no longer
leave me yearning for more
no longer safe from all
enveloped within your arms
as reality strikes
nothing lasts forever
if only it were as easy
to say goodbye
as it is to say
hello

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-08-08 01:05 AM

Actually, DQ, I really enjoyed this one. The meaning/message of it all is One I'm sure we can all relate to- I know I can. Thanks for the read. It was nice. You did well!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-08-08 02:09 AM

"if only it were as easy
to say goodbye
as it is to say
hello"
Wow, DQ... how many times have I wondered that same thing? This is something that others will definitely relate to. I really enjoyed this one... it was very well written, and the message was very true. Nicely done, I enjoyed this.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2001-08-08 03:05 AM

how purdy! hehe great poem!
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

4 posted 2001-08-08 03:21 AM

This poem is really good what are you talking about girl.Well I haven't talked to you in awhile but I hope everything is going ok.And keep up the awsome work like usual.
Lauren

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

5 posted 2001-08-08 03:54 AM

I don't think i've read your other stuff?

But this was really good... Love's the hardest thing... hope it all gets easier

ALLIE

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-08-08 04:43 AM

I thought this was very well written. I enjoyed this one a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Raven Skye
Member

since 2001-03-03

Posts 112
.In a House.

7 posted 2001-08-08 10:57 AM

i like it alot...

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

8 posted 2001-08-08 12:47 PM

this is really good... I liked that last few lines. thanks for sharing

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-08-08 09:31 PM

"if only it were as easy
to say goodbye
as it is to say
hello"

That is soooooo beautiful Kiley

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

sean mani
Junior Member

since 2001-08-06

Posts 27

10 posted 2001-08-09 09:49 AM

hey...this was a good one...

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

11 posted 2001-08-10 05:33 PM

thanks everyone

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

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