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Ski*Chick
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since 2001-01-13
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0 posted 2001-07-25 06:28 PM


When I think of someone special
I think of all the people who I have helped
And when I’m in pain they always pull me together

Sometimes I cry because I think people don’t want to talk to me
But there’s always someone willing to talk to me
All my friends are so special

I will miss them when I graduate
I know some will leave me, some will always be a phone call away
When there’s no more days to be a friend we have all put a footprint in someone’s heart

They tell me not to give up because of people
Just go for my dreams
Reach for my dreams

This is to all my friends who always make me laugh, sometimes I feel like I am going to cry but I have friends. I love you all thanks for helping me  Love, Minna  


Minna July 24, 2001

“Friends make the world go around”

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

© Copyright 2001 Minna - All Rights Reserved
pure_innocence
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since 2001-07-14
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Colorado, US
1 posted 2001-07-25 07:29 PM


A sweet message to the important people in your life, My own graduation is 305 days away (not that I'm counting) and I too have friends that will be missed.  But Lord I can't wait to reach the real world, I hope you find that it holds as much happiness as these sweet memories of High School and of friends never to be forgotten.
DarkenedShadow
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Kansas
2 posted 2001-07-25 08:41 PM


Ifeel you on this, I always have this fear of dying alone and having all my friends and loved ones leave. I wish I can take them all with me but anyway.... obvisously your work did strike some thoughts in my mind and emotion on top of that... good job. /Nick/
Punk Angel
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3 posted 2001-07-25 11:02 PM


nice poem, it shows how much u truely care.   keep up the good work
Ski*Chick
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4 posted 2001-07-26 12:12 PM


All my friends mean so much to me, cause they are like my world. If I can't face it they help me face it. I have this one friend Matt who lost his dad at a early age too he tells me keep going cause your dad's right behind you and he loves you death. Friendships are so dear to me because my disability keeps getting worse as I get older. I fight every day every second, with it and sometimes I get so lost thats why my friends are dear to me.
I also have a different kind of a friend her name is Lucy she's a black lab a dog friend, she has been there for me when I needed her and she somehow helps me fight my disability by making me laugh when I'm having a hard day.
Min

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

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5 posted 2001-07-26 01:58 AM


sweet poem ...i liked it...and its nice to see...a poem by you like this...bye Min

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6 posted 2001-07-26 04:08 PM


I thought it was a nice poem! Great job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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7 posted 2001-07-31 12:13 PM


This is a VERY sweet tribute, Minna.  You're lucky to have such awesome friends.  And after graduation, they will always be there because that's what they are.. awesome friends   Nicely done.  I really enjoyed this one.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Shygirl82
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Ilinois
8 posted 2001-07-31 03:42 AM


This was an incredibly sweet tribute and I hope your friends know just how much they mean to you.  I am sure they feel they same about you and that they are lucky to have a friend who cares so much.  
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

allie
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9 posted 2001-07-31 03:45 AM


Arent they the greatest... im sorry to hear about the hard times in this poem... but really glad to hear you have a group of friends who held you soo much...

ALLIE

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10 posted 2001-08-02 05:20 AM


Friends are wonderful things, Minna.  I disagree that you should feel "lucky" to have such awesome friends.  Luck had nothing to do with it, you earned every friend that you have.  And you should be proud to have such good people as your friends.  
As for me, I'm only an instant message away, should you ever want to talk.  Sorry if I'm busy sometimes, but I tend to multitask.  
Nice work Minna, I've missed reading yours.
~Allan

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11 posted 2001-08-02 09:14 AM


Hey,

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               | what he said (allan) well most of it and after this number of replie I am left with nothing much to say   but you know you still love me. :-P

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Low Man's Lyric
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In a dream
12 posted 2001-08-02 10:58 AM


I know what you mean, I myself have graduated but I am returning to Highschool for one more year to finish this course. Of course you might lose some friends but who knows how many you will gain in College or University.

"Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before."
~Steven Wright

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