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Gone Without a Trace |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
A face as beautiful as a starlight night, But I cannot see that face, Try as hard as I might. I’ve spoken with the owner of this visage, Know her as a friend, Yet is the face I truly see, The image she truly meant to send? Can words reveal a countenance, Worthy of this face? At times I can see it clear, Only to have it flee my memory, Gone without a trace. "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
that's really amazing!... i enjoyed this a lot... it had a very mysterious feel to it... ALLIE |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Adam - Your use of words is beginning to aww me.  What more can I say than that I love it... Almost as much as I am starting to love you. *hugs* |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
*returns the hug* you think they're figuring it out yet? To anyone that hasn't figured it out yet...Jessica's the girl I've never met, that I find myself falling in love with.  -Kosetsu "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
CAREFUL! Love is an EXTREMELY big word to use. OK- Well not BIG..It's just 4 letters...but it's Heavy, filled with so much meaning, feeling, emotion. Though I'm sure you 2 both know this. So ya..  Anyway- Nice poem. The last stanza was my fav. Off I go! |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one a lot. Well done here. A bit diff from yer usual and i liked it. A change is always good.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......  ....no need to reprimand the love birds jesa!!!...wishing you all the best you guys!!!...sweet poem once again kose!!"Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
youve wriiten jessica some beautiful poems. keep writing . happiness to you both. Regina |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
we have love going all around.. its the best isnt it ?? To the poem great work!!! Not much more to say then you 2 be good.. are u ever going to meet?? ~Jeff~ |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
We've talked about it Jeff, but with school starting in less than a week for me, I probably won't have time. I think the first chance I might be able to get will be around October-September..not sure when our Fall Break is. We've agreed to wait for a few months before we meet, anyway. That way we'll really have some time to get to know each other...I guess we're both just a little scared to meet just yet. But hey, like you said..love's great when it finally works out right. (*hugs Jess*) -Kosetsu "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This was another poem that was very well written. I enjoyed this, as usual. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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