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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-07-15 01:39 PM

Did I make you jealous,
when I talked to him?

Did I make you jealous,
when I swam with him?

Did I make you jealous,
when I held his hand and jumped into the water?

Did I make you jealous,
when I hugged him goodbye?

Did I make you jealous,
when I rubbed lotion on his back?

Did I make you jealous,
when he made me laugh?

Did I make you jealous,
even though we aren't together?

I'm sorry if I talked too much,
I'm sorry if I swam too much,
I'm sorry if I held his hand too long,
I'm sorry if I hugged him too tight,
I'm sorry if I rubbed the lotion too long,
I'm sorry if I laughed to hard,
I'm sorry that me and you aren't together.

It"s just that everytime I'm near you,
I'll do anything just to get you back.

Everytime I'm around you,
I'll do anything just to have you.

Everytime you're around,
I just want to kiss you.

Everytime you're around,
I want you to hold me.

Everytime you're around,
I don't want you to take your eyes off me.

Everytime you're around,
I just want to melt into you.

And I want to make him jealous,
I want to be all over you like we usually are.

Did I make you jealous?
Because I didn't mean too.
He's just my friend.
You're the one who's more.
More than just a friend.
More than just another guy.
More than just another lover.

Am I making you jealous?
I don't want to.
You're just so much more

This is just a little rant.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-07-15 02:52 PM

well i liked this rant *L*

you expressed it very nice. are you going to give this to the guy who's more then just a lover? i think you should LOL well good luck! hope you don't end up leading the other guy on... then you'd have one hell of a situation!

Valerie

"...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-07-16 03:39 AM

yea...this seems like some daytime drama..

...well, i hope to tell this guy how you truly feel...i liked the poem...and a nice "rant" it was, Allsa

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

allie
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since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

3 posted 2001-07-16 03:46 AM

Really enjoyed it... especially cause i can relate to the two way afftection... often find myself trying to make people jealous...
Very realistic.

THANKZ,

ALLIE

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-07-16 07:03 PM

Delightful rant, Allysa. I can relate...with 2 people actually. HaHa...Anyway- I really liked this. I thought you did a terrific job displaying your thoughts.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-07-16 09:07 PM

The poem was well done. The repitition worked well. I didn't agree with the idea or the message, but the poem was well written. Nicely done.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning...

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

6 posted 2001-07-17 11:41 AM

Story time:

Okay, the guy this poem is for/about is Justin *(he's the one who's more than just a friend and the one I love)*. the other guy mentioned is his cousin (i think, but I'm not sure) AJ, who went with us to the pool. there's nothing between me and AJ, we're just really good friends. AJ has a girlfriend and a kid on the way. It's just that I was talking to AJ and then I'd try and talk to Justin, and he wasn't his chattery self. Then AJ walked me home from the pool because Justin didn't want to leave yet and AJ and I just get along really well. We went inside Justin's house and sat around and chilled because AJ was staying over at Justin's. But Justin won't ever let me in the house because he says that he's affraid of what might happen. It's like him not letting me in the house is the only thing stopping us from making out or whatever. I love Justin always and forever, and no matter what other people may think, AJ and I are just FRIENDS> My friend Donna tried to hook me and him up, but it didn't work because I Liked Justin at the time and I still like Justin. i always will. I just wish the boy would go back out with me! I've never felt the way I feel about him before. It's frustrating! Ya all need to give me courage to get up the nerve to either ask him back out or just plain kiss him! I need your help!

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-07-18 03:44 AM

Didnt you post a poem simular to this one taling about you rubbing lotion on some guys back?
Anyhow, I liked it. Well done and a good rant.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

8 posted 2001-07-18 01:26 PM

Yeah, Dopes, that was part of it. Tomorrow's Justin's b-day, so I dunno what's gonna happen b/c I haven't talked to him in 4 or 5 days and I haven't been invited to his party thing yet. Blah!

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

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