Teen Poetry #5 |
Dear Justin |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Dear Justin: Although you might not know it, and you wouldn't because I won't say, I love you more than anything. I love you more than my dreams, which might not mean a lot, except that they are me. I love you more than happiness, which I find in you, and I hope you'll find in me. I love you more than the world, and I love the world a lot, because then there would be no conflict (hence, no poems for me). If I had to pick between having everything, anything I've ever wanted, and having you, I know what I'd pick. I'd pick you in a heartbeat, because with you lies my true happiness, and without you I could never be. Although I might never say it, I love you more than anything, just remember that. Alyssa Okay, this sucks majorly. It's wayyyyy tooooo sappppyyyy! Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
It didn't suck! There's nothin wrong with sappy... hehe I thought it was very good. Good Job!!! - Cody - |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I liked the idea of this Allysa...You had some really good thoughts here. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i enjoyed your thoughts...and your poems NEVER suck...so dont say that...nice job, Allysa im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
enjoyable, didnt suck... Good post, ALLIE |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I liked this, Allysa. Although I didn't think it was the best I've read from you, I didnt enjoy the read. Thanks for sharing. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning... |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks you guys! You're sweet! Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You are just the sweetest. Justin doesn't know what he's missing out on . I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks Dopey, you're the sweetest! I want to show Justin what he's missing out on so he'll come back. I have hatched so many evil plans but I haven't put any of them into motion. Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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