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fairy girl
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 10
*~*Virginia*~*

0 posted 2001-07-14 10:54 PM

this isn't one of my best, just a quick first post, more to come. tell me what ya think, thanks. bye.

when i look at you

when i look at you i see all that i need
i see all that i want and all that i need to be
when i look at you i see love in your eyes
that love is for me, i smile and sigh
when i look at you i see what i've been looking for
who knows what the future has in store
when i look at you theres nothing else i can do
but sit here and look at you

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-07-14 10:57 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
this hit ME home!...wow...i relate to this...this is exactly what i feel these days...so much is behind this poem...you did well on expressing it

...i hope to see you read,share and reply more.

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-14-2001).]

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-07-14 11:41 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!

You did a terrific job expressiong your feelings. I liked this. I hope to see more form you in the future.

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-07-14 11:53 PM

Welcome To Passions!

Hope ya enjoy your time here.

The poem was very good, I thought that it was a great first post, and I hope that you keep posting your work here.

- Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-07-15 12:00 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS FAIRY!!

you said that you have more in store well judging by this one i cant wait to have a read!!!...this is a sweet first post-it put a smile on my face

..thanks for sharing and hope you enjoy your stay here..

lil_pwheeler
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 39
here

5 posted 2001-07-15 12:03 PM

Hey welcome home.
Thats a great starter. Can't wait for more work. good job.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-07-15 12:47 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

Great first post and im definately gonna hold you to that promise of more being in store. Good job and i cant wait to see more from you so keep em coming!

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-07-15 02:48 AM

Welcome to Passions!

It's a nice first post you have shared with us all. Thank you for putting it up for all of us to see. I look forward to your many more replies and posts with us in the future.

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-07-16 02:40 AM

Welcome to pipTalk!!

This is a very well written poem... shows desperation to me. I loved the ending. I really enjoyed it, and I look forward to seeing more of your replies and posts around here

Again, welcome, and nicely done.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

9 posted 2001-07-16 11:58 AM

Welcome to Passions Fairy Girl! I truly enjoyed your first post. We all look forward to seeing more of your work and replies. (Please check your email for a special greeting)

HeavensTears~Moderator/Passions in Poetry

Hill's_Chatabox
Junior Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 46
USA

10 posted 2001-07-16 01:56 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Good first post can't wait to read more...
~Hillary~

Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!!

Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it, Beacuse I might do so

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

11 posted 2001-07-16 07:06 PM

Welcome to Passions! Good first post, keep writing. ab

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

12 posted 2001-07-18 03:41 AM

Great job on this one. i felt it hit home for me. Nicely written.
Welcome to passions! I hope you enjoy it here as much as we all do.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

13 posted 2001-07-18 03:57 AM

nice post,
WELCOME,
im new too!
Good work with the poem,
nice that you found someone to love so much.
ALLIE

Starnite
Junior Member

since 2001-07-05

Posts 41
Wisconsin

14 posted 2001-07-18 07:18 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!

That was a great 1st post. I hope to read more of them

**Sarah

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

15 posted 2001-07-18 09:00 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!

hope you like it here as much as we all do. it's a wonderful place with friends who are like family.

great first post too. short and sweet. I loves it

I LOVE ZU, hey Albie, Cody, Allan, Carly, Cherish, Lizzy, Kris, *HUGS JAVI*, Tamma, Acire, and Branden.
*HUGS ZU*

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