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Trina
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 97


0 posted 2001-06-28 10:00 PM


Giving me the evil eye
while I walk around
looking cute with my dimples
and my long brown hair
with your former man at my side

You look at me enviously
trying to find my every flaw
to go point out to your friends
and laugh a while
at nothing of importance

Doing everything to get close
and get me out the picture
well, you had your turn
now in his eyes
it's my time to shine

I'm walking around
just as happy as can be
see I have no insecurities
I don't need to judge and analyze
you or any other female

You are no on to me
not even an enemy
you are just a very insecure girl
with many flaws
your biggest flaw of all
is being a hater

© Copyright 2001 Trina - All Rights Reserved
TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
1 posted 2001-06-28 10:04 PM


I love this poem because I hate girls who walk around trying to find something wrong with me because they are jealous.Because the only reason they are trying to find something wrong with me is because they are insecure with themselves.But anyway great poem I love it and I can't wait to read more of your's.
  Lauren

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2001-06-28 10:06 PM


Hi....this poem has been posted in 3 forums so far. Please contact me and let me know which forum you want it in? It is against the guidelines to post the same poem in more than one forum.

poetdevine@yahoo.com

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