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Your Little Girl |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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I may be 18 now, all grown up But I’m still your little girl I've just grown up is all I still need you both You tell everyone that I’m your baby But I don’t look like much of a baby I may still be your little girl But I’ve fallen in love Mom & Dad – I need your help I need your support You’ve been there thru everything I really care about him . . . He’s not like the other guys I’m still a little girl And I might get hurt So, in case that happens I need you, Mom & Dad *sigh* nobody cares |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
awww that rocks I really like it kinda how i'm feeling with my rents right now only I'm their little boy lol I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Awww. That is so sweet. I am not getting along w/ my parents right now, so I cant say the same, but thats OK. *Amanda* |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
This is sooo sweet. And it applies to a lot of us out here at Pip. I enjoyed this. Keep posting! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
THAT IS SWEET. I CAN FEEL THAT ONE BECAUSE I'M A "DADDY'S GIRL".  No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17 |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work I really enjoyed the read, Andrew |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww... Tamma, this is a very sweet poem. That's the right thing to reach out to your mom and dad. After my first real heartache I had a long talk with my mom, and realized she knows a lot more that I give her credit for. LOL. Best of luck in this relationship. I hope all goes well. And nice work with this poem. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweeeeet ...hope you showed this too them...graet job on expressing this one...bye Tamma  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
let me add to the chorus of awwwws because this is a really beautiful way to express love for your parents. I think parents get overlooked a lot in teen poetry, but you've hit the nail right on that cliche. i hope you showed this to them!!! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I glad that you've realized that eventhough you are legally an adult, you're still young and still need help from your parents. I hope things work out for you this time. Thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
all i can say is awwwwwwwwwwww *hug* And I cry to the alleyway |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Having the comfort of your parents to run back to can be helpful for many. I hope they serve a purpose well for you, Tamma. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ugh....18 was so hard I know what you mean here....I remember going through this too it really is the best to have parents you can go to for the comfort and support you need you are never too old for that trust me I loved this poem! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sweet Tamma. I think you should show this to them. I'm sure they'd love it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I don't know if 18 is hard or not, but I know what it's like to run to yer parents...I've done it so often. of course, I'm daddy's little girl, and momma's little princess, and Zu's angel  -->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile. |
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