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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-25 09:47 PM



You Can Trust ME, Balladeer
~*Marge Tindal*~

He really doesn't trust
a single word I say
I say 'scent'
and IMMEDIATELY
he turns to run away

He's the one who's a STINKER
Don't let his flattery fool you yet
He's a rascal in disguise
And a sweller-feller I never met !

TRUST ME !
Or maybe that's SMELLER-FELLER !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-25 09:49 PM


ROFL...i trust ya, my friend!
i'd be scared not to!! lol

this is just too cute!
I LOVE IT!!  

hugs,
~vicky

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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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2 posted 2001-06-25 09:58 PM


cute Marge     very cute  

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3 posted 2001-06-25 09:58 PM


ROTF...now I have to go find the OTHER one....
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4 posted 2001-06-25 10:07 PM


Now THERE'S the Marge that my nose knows!
Yes, I'm a stinker, I suppose
But I've been fooled so many times
The ways she piddles with her rhymes
Mixes meanings in like stew
Then blends as only she can do
Simple thoughts go in a blender
Come out cut up like double-intenders
And by the time they reach your head
You've no idea what she said
and, when you know you missed the point
You find your nose is out of joint
Ole Marge just smiles and tilts her head
And makes you wish that you were dead..

Well, I have not been badly schooled
And I am tired of being fooled!
I'll figure you out good some day..
Until that day comes by....LET'S PLAY!!!  



love ya, Seminole gal




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5 posted 2001-06-25 10:12 PM


Awwww ... loved this Marge ... big, big grins!  And ROFL at Michael, love ya both!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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6 posted 2001-06-25 10:16 PM


Vicky~
Tee-Hee !  
He's a doozie ... but he's MY doozie !

SEA~
Thankee, gal !

Karilea~
You're a good scout !

Balladeer~
You DO tickle my fancy !
Don't ever stop !
I do love ya' ... BUNCHES !

Kit~
We just keep on ticking - licking - and sticking like glue !
Friends to the end ... that's us !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-06-26 01:48 AM


Little stinker,  
I'm scared to rhyme,
He catches my mistakes,
Every darn time.

But I have to agree,
He's cute, don't you think,
Even if the poor boy,
Is cursed with that stink!

Marge,
You are always cheering us all up, and Balladeer, that was pretty darn funny.


"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~


[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-26-2001).]

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8 posted 2001-06-26 04:53 AM


Mysteria~
Cute, cute quip !
Girlie lip ...
I thank you a lot ..
But go to your room
for that you-know-what !
LOL !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-06-26 11:52 AM


Oh my goodness,
I gave Marge the finger!
So in this corner,
I must now linger.

Looked like a thumb,
Held up in the air,
Trying to tell her,
The poem was better than fair (yup, forced!)
he he

(removed the cute little red guy who was naughty)  Luv ya, Margie girl!

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10 posted 2001-06-26 12:01 PM


    

regards Marge,
sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

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11 posted 2001-06-26 12:10 PM


Marge, you stinker
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12 posted 2001-06-26 12:19 PM


Mysteria~
Doubled over in laughter here !

Chief 'RedFinger' thanks you !

Sudhir~
Right back at ya', babe !

InterLoper~
Yep !  That's me alright ! !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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