Open Poetry #14 |
Wavering Fluctuations |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wavering Fluctuations in desire to bend round an angle curve the mirrors of your stare spin your gaze into a quest in all of this, rotate beware spool along the illuminate fluctuate with equine equate waver on in rippled streams fetch along a tinge of dream shilly-shally within your fate unearthing me in your sublimate then when all is said and done harbor you within my sun |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Awesome. Just awesome. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
spool along the illuminate fluctuate with equine equate waver on in rippled streams fetch along a tinge of dream shilly-shally within your fate unearthing me in your sublimate then when all is said and done harbor you within my sun ============================= ahh that muse of yours just toys with us... this poem is so very cool...loved the rhyme scheme and flow..as well as the vocab... well done poetess sun I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you are awesome!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Two awesomes and a gypsy moth who never fails to alight on me....thank you all! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Care for three awesomes? Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
fourth awesome here....is there such a thing as an unwavering fluctuation? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Wonderful word play and composition here.. loved this one |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
What Interloper said. Bob |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, to what they said Truly enjoyed. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ This just rolls then it rocks Wafting merrily back to the top ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
a fifth AWESOME here... really... regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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