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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
If you’ll climb with me to highest peaks… If you’ll sail with me on deepest seas… If you’ll walk with me our hand in hand… If you’ll talk with me, then One we’ll be… So take this time and climb this mount… So take this time and sail with me… So take this time our hand in hand… So take this time, come walk with me… Our time is here, we’re together… Our time is here, and it will be… Our time is here, with hand in hand… Our time is here, eternity… Time it’s said, will never stop. Time for us, is all for naught. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Whoa! The last line blew me away. Such a contrast to the rest of the poem. Or am I reading it wrong? |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
2dalimit- Nicely written. Enjoyed the read. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I have the same question as VAS... Did i read the poem entirely wrong? Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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