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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-06-14 01:25 AM

I missed you.
Now I am assuming
all my hopes and thought
consuming
practice for reality
beating heart always
in keep
Tell me that what is--
just is--
erase the board-
I don't exist.

I missed you.
and now
something's died
inside
to think
of tears I cried
that my love
be bothering
of lie
I wish I'd
never tried.
each drop
each tear
a christening
every longing
song
to sing..

I missed you.
And I always will.
I love you.
That is bitter pill.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-06-14 01:31 AM

A hushed wow...

"I missed you.
And I always will.
I love you.
That is bitter pill"

indeed hon.
Hugs

Maree

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-06-14 02:25 AM

I'm hushed too......wow....always, you amaze me

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

3 posted 2001-06-14 09:16 AM

absolutely amazing!

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2001-06-14 09:24 AM

Great, just great!!! I thought this was really descriptive. Thank you for allowing me to read it. Just beautiful...

Jenn

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-06-14 09:25 AM

My firned, you have said it all, just as well as I should have. awesome write. To the point. Those bitter pills are so hard to swallow.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-06-14 09:35 AM

sighing Serenity..you express so well..words can tear at a heart..huggs

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

IWithinYou
Junior Member

since 2001-06-14

Posts 21
Within You

7 posted 2001-06-14 10:59 AM

Oh the sharpness of loss, especially new. You write these feelings well. My many compliments.......
"Spill your words of thickness, like ketchup, across my mind"

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

8 posted 2001-06-14 11:35 AM

as always, you write 'me' in such powerful terms...great stuff lady...sigh

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

9 posted 2001-06-14 11:40 AM

Very powerful words serene one, delivered with style. Thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2001-06-14 12:01 PM

You have such a dreamlike finesse in projecting exactly what you want to say in such an amazing way... and I remain forever impressed

Regards O Serene One,
Sudhir

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