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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-06-13 05:28 PM

~*~

she is calming all
on her waves of thoughts perceived
she draws close to shore

~*~

she is comfort, cheer
her depths, cool, not yet conceived
she is our own SEA

~*~

habitually
she horizontally sends
minds on vacation

~*~

sunshine greets her wave
her blue-green delights us all
refreshing, our SEA

~*~

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-13-2001).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-06-13 05:30 PM

Clever title and great poetry!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-13 05:30 PM

Well done. But I thought a SEAryu was i the form of 5-4-5 ...
GR8 tribute to a fine poet and a good friend.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-06-13 05:32 PM

oh my love the gentle waves of this SEAnryu....love this tribute for our own SEA.

((hugs))
Charisma

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-06-13 05:33 PM

Sunshine,
Interestig, I enjoyed. *L*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-06-13 05:36 PM

Ethome, thank SEA...she started it!...

Interloper....read it again...SEAnryu...LOL...

Charisma, my constant and faithful TANKA poet....thank you....

SY....thank you! They are fun to compose!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada