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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-10 12:58 PM

Pearls of Night

driving
through the night
string
pearled headlights
press
against blackness
my necklace
breaks apart
as they
aproach

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-06-10 01:05 AM

I could actually see this...very cool! Though I hope the precious ones are still safely around your neck.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-06-10 01:07 AM

Yes, the dreamstate of driving, Brings to mind other times, other places..very nicely done,,thank you...gentle smile

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-06-10 01:13 AM

I loved the visual of this...and how you tied in the symbolism. Abstract, yet generally accessible. A nice melding ot the two---I liked very much!

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

4 posted 2001-06-10 12:36 PM

Visualization so intense and flowing.
You need not close your eyes to see.
Memories and anticipation become as one.
Thank you Dear lady for an excellent read.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-06-10 01:18 PM

OneSlickLady~
Just too cool is the imagery here !
WONDERFUL !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-06-10 01:57 PM

I agree with all above...wonderful image and idea...nicely done.

Poeminister

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-06-10 02:03 PM

love the way you described those headlights.....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 06-10-2001).]

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2001-06-10 02:08 PM

A very clever use of two themes intertwined!

Take care,
Melissa~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-06-10 06:34 PM

I'm not sure what to make of this helen. . . it seems that the two are meeting head on. . . almost like a crash course. . .

it's just full of total symbolism. . . that's what I like about it. . .

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2001-06-10 06:42 PM

Good poem! Very enjoyable read!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

11 posted 2001-06-11 12:12 PM

I've seen those pearls too.

theLadypoet
Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 97
Or USA

12 posted 2001-06-11 12:21 PM

Sweet as summer raspberries and full of energy in a soft, quiet manner. Symbolism
galore. Good read.

theLadypoet

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt

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