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Deny Love
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Deny Love . I can’t understand love, All humans are just animals, These feelings I feel, They cannot be real . When I think I care, I have to think why, Our only purpose, Is to have no purpose and die . I am born to decay, Why should I try ? When soon I’ll be gone, To the wind as a cry . The way I feel, Whenever she’s near, I question the point, But know it is dear . Even when I die, At least I’ll look back, At the times that we had, Where in sadness there was lack . I still question the way that I feel, Love I now defy, And in this whole defiance, My love I should deny . Written by Tom Baker .© 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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PiXiEpUnKeR Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49IL, USA |
Our only purpose, Is to have no purpose and die . I am born to decay, There is a crazily (is that a word?) strong sense of emotion in these lines! Are you ok? This poems seems very dark... I enjoyed it though! Great job |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thanks, I wrote this poem a while ago now, when I was going through a dark patch, but I am fine now . Also, I think that if crazily isn't a word, then it should be now, as it made perfect sence to me . Thanks for your concern and the reply . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
sorry for taking so long in getting to this one, I think it is a bit dark but very well written and hope all is better now  |
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theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
 So sad...real heart-tugger!! theLadypoet "A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Many thanks you to dear chummies . Sorry about the Darkness, I promise I will try to write more positivly from now on . Ta for the reply . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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