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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-06-08 03:34 PM


with words so lovely
touch me tonight
whisper sweet nothings

~*~
rhymes flow from your pen
like a river
flowing into SEA

~*~

swirl me in your dance
surrounding me
in words of romance

~*~
I am swept away
Interloper
thank you for your words


~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-06-08 05:42 PM


very nice, I love the shorter lines!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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2 posted 2001-06-08 05:59 PM


good job...less is more

theLadypoet

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Charisma
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3 posted 2001-06-08 07:21 PM


swirl me in your dance
surrounding me
in words of romance

oh my these lines are soooo romantic....love it Sea

((hugs))

Charisma

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4 posted 2001-06-08 08:17 PM


romantic and i enjoy  
Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-06-08 10:09 PM



  what could I say     

SEA, it's a beauty

Titia

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