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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-08 08:06 AM



Having stood so long
against the abrasive
words blown by each
and every passing storm
I find my face no longer
holds the beauty of
a smile...

You have buried me
over time,
left me covered, sightless,
so that even in
resurrected light
I am immobile.


No tomb was
ever so
silent

as your
eyes

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-06-08 08:41 AM


Oh, my....eyes can say SO much, or so very little....

and you have captured that intensity extremely well....

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
2 posted 2001-06-08 09:31 AM





No tomb was
ever so
silent

as your
eyes
*************

Indeed......and you have captured that silence so well.....

Thank you
*******************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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Michigan
3 posted 2001-06-08 12:32 PM


Yes, I'm reading every word of yours I can find.
A Poet's Poet. This would be what you are.

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-06-08 12:34 PM


Well conceived and presented  
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