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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-06-06 06:16 PM


Our Temple


Let's build our temple
With gold and marble
It will penetrate high into Heaven's air

And no one shall enter
Except by our offer
It will be our very own love-lair

In bright Sun's sheen
It'll be richly beseen
we'll seize our days in it's size

With turrets grand
It will mighty stand
By Love's hand we work paradise

We can have a balcony
That opens to the sea
Of clouds on which we'll jump to

In passions we'll dance
And 'on rainbows prance
And never by chance fall through

It will be a haven
Yes a sweet sweet heaven
For us to find peace in and cherish

For truest love willed
Can these things build
Can touch highest stratums of wish

© Copyright 2001 Kevin Rainbow - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-06 06:19 PM


PM~ major sighs here.....love this...so beautiful  
angelbear
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2 posted 2001-06-06 06:24 PM


Very beuatiful... this should be part of wedding vows. Love it!  

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

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3 posted 2001-06-06 07:28 PM


to worship at this temple is the dream of all. . .

well done. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sven
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4 posted 2001-06-06 07:28 PM


to worship at this temple is the dream of all. . .

well done. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-06-07 09:15 AM


*sigh* {{hugs}} So romanitcal
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2001-06-07 09:18 AM


Ahh....many, MANY reasons why I like this so very much!
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7 posted 2001-06-07 10:06 PM


great poem  
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