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Losing Control
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Losing Control |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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this is one of my first poems I wrote. But never had posted in passions till now.  LOSING CONTROL Oh baby what have you done to me, passionate feelings overwhelming me, you lift me higher, than I was ever before helplessly drifting, just longing for more. I'm losing control, cause you are on my mind, can't let this happen, must go and leave you behind, I'm fighting against it, but must face the truth, that I'm falling in love with you. Please tell me, is this really love what I see, and feel this love, everytime you are embracing me, and even the sadness, when you leave me behind while you still tease me, cause you are on my mind. Drifting away, when I'm leaving the ground, while losing control, in the love that I've found, when you hold me tight and kiss me so sweet, your passionate love is all what I need. Charisma ~*TMP*~ january 2000 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Love is the currency of life. Well done. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma....absolutely love this!! wonderful...glad you posted it now!  SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Bless your little passionate heart  Kathleen Blake |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Glad you finally decided to share it with us. Just beautifull Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Very passionate...very beautiful. Love it! PM |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Love the images you put forth in your words. (the graphic goes so nicely with sentiment of poem too!!) I can't control |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this. . . I like. . .  sometimes, you've just got to do it. . . you know that though don't you my friend?? great job with this one. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ *smiling* at the loss of control ! ! LOVE IT ! Got any more of these little gems ?  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful descriptive emotions Charisma, nicely written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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MrTrial New Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 3 |
...Ahh great romantic poetry at its best. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, Wow! I sat it again backwards Wow! Fantabulous! Stupendous! Sorry I was overcome by the passion in this. Pretty good old girl! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice expression of passion and of love... enjoyed the read! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Interloper: yes love is the currency of life. Sea: so glad that you loved this one Kathleen: thank you so much for your blessing words Titia: thank you for the beautiful Poeminister: Really happy that you loved it Angelbear: thank you for your nice comments, behind the image is a link that will guide you to the same poem on my homepage.....within a lake.class. Sven: are you sure that you like this one  and off course I knew  Marge: My friend I'm really glad you like it  Kit: thank you so much Mr.Trial: thank you for your sweet comment Kethry: my friend thank you for these wow...glad you enjoyed the passions within Cpat hair: thank you passing by and your comment, glad that you enjoyed the read |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
 i love it really it is so passionateand full of love  |
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