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Open Poetry #14

poem - para-a-medic

PoemCrazy
Member

since 2000-11-30

Posts 159

0 posted 2001-06-06 02:39 AM

you make me smile where even i can't see it

ms. mysterious, what are you?
i didn't hear you shout "clear"
but you made my heart start again.

forgive my forwardness,
but that doesn't happen everyday.

if you were just doing your job,
then all i should say is "i thank you".

but i'd like to say more.

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

1 posted 2001-06-07 04:02 PM

"you make me smile where even i can't see it"

Loved that line...to the front for all who missed!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

2 posted 2001-06-07 04:04 PM

People should be more forward. I loved this.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

3 posted 2001-06-07 04:59 PM

WOW! great lines

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