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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- three words are simply all that is the only three I know exist that say it with profundity and cover all complexity each nuance every shadow play where are the words I long to say? With adoring gaze of you I think them an idea--new and always I am so amazed as if I'd coined a brand new phrase... I love you. And that says it all. But yet won't touch my heart in crawl simplicity of not enough I love you madly - love you, love. and yes, type is so incomplete... and words are lovely lover's treat but still I yearn to have still more I love you, love you, mine? Adore. (*repost* because I feel the same way now...smile) |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
this poem is grand as is love  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's lovely, Serenity, and written with so much sincerity. Kathleen Blake |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I love you. And that says it all. But yet won't touch my heart in crawl simplicity of not enough I love you madly - love you, love. and yes, type is so incomplete... and words are lovely lover's treat but still I yearn to have still more I love you, love you, mine? Adore. =============================== I love you too baby!! AND .... ERRRRR ... AHHHHH .... WHAT??? NOT for ME??  OH well I love you anyway.. what the hell...lets give em something to talk about on ICQ ROFLMA .... OK OK...I'll be good or we will end up on Seas thread in   yer lovely in love me twin *S* |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, yes....those 3 little words can make such a difference in one's life!! Serenity, your happiness is showing!!! I love how it comes through in this one!!  The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Such beauty, such passions, sighhh I expect nothing less from you me sista! Love it! Maree |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Three words that say so much...but at times never say near enough...beautiful work s'en...you weave it like an angel and I'm thankful for the repost. Take care of you girlie...Love you |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
and yes, type is so incomplete... and words are lovely lover's treat but still I yearn to have still more I love you, love you, mine? Adore. Some times three simple words can mean alot some times words have alot of power, more than we may think. Sorry I am ranting here. enjoyed the read. take care |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I agree with all the others above, just loved it. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Perfect rhyme, I love this one, Thank you for sharing it. Regards, Olias. |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
Those three words seperated so simple combined the ultimate MysteryGivingLongingHope How we strive search yea everyone to hear those three words spoken in tranquil light in passions throes three words We all live for "The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance." |
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