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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lover, Where have you gone in my hour of need? when I long to hear you speak consolingly to my tortured soul Make sweet love to me with your tender words, touch softly, secretly, arouse, awaken me chase away these nightmares & paint for me rainbows filled with kisses Lover, come for nights are cold & heaven knows, I need you... ~Tier 5/01 [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-26-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely! Kathleen Blake |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Tierdin---Your style of poetry is very appealing. Felt this! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tiersdin~ Such a lovely impassioned plea ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you've got my attention Tier. . . this is full of fire and passion. . . a plea from the heart. . . excellent. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, kindly, Irish Rose! *smiles* JLR, thank you, very kind for you to say! Thank you, Marge, I appreciate your commenting, always! Sven, Thank you. Sweet words from a very tender heart. ~Tier |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
very lovely an moving poem,enjoyed it tremendously |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Watersign6, I appreciater your commenting! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
With a request like this how can he stay away? Very sweetly written |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you Paula! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this is so very tender and beautiful a message. A heartfelt call. I loved reading it. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you so much, Startime! ~Tier |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Echoing the others, I did indeed love this. Simply perfect. Sandra |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Sandra, I appreciate your comment! *smiles* ~Tier |
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