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Long-Upon-A-Time Ago
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Long-Upon-A-Time Ago |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Long-Upon-A-Time Ago ~*Marge Tindal*~  The winds of desire in recall blew across the breach of loving you Wafting memories to renew the place - the time spent loving you ~*~ Stranding me in soft remember quilled long-upon-a-time ago when you were mine and loved me so Desirous wind blows in ice-slivered chill melting warm memories of loving you still ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marge...perfect pic to go with the fond memory! As always, tenderly and warmly written from your heart! Hugs.  |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
A heart not silent reaching will be heard today tomorrow time that errant cousin you never mind call and you shall hear too many hearts breaking too many alone too much pain let it go in one simple song it will be it is Heard |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Memories can be so painful..... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awe, what a picture and a memory! Your work is always something wonderful to read! I loved it! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Margie, so softly and painfully expressed perfectly accompanied by the hourglass shape and picture, oh, how I relate. Into my library this goes~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Thank ya', doll ! PoetMortemAutopsy~ Okay ! Elizabeth~ Or ... so wonderfully recalled ~ Saunni~ I appreciate your sweet thoughts. Melissa~ Hello, little Honeybee !  Thank you for noticing all things. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well...you are sure the "put it all together in a fantastic package Queen" that is for sure. I love the picture, the shape of your poem, and the poetry was fantastic, and now I can't figure out what came first - the picture or the poem? (he he, knowing you the hourglass) Whatever, beautifully done as usual, but do I expect any less, no!~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Thanks for the sweet compliment ... The poem came first, the 'hourglass' just fell into place with the words and then the search for the photo ... LOL ! In the search for the photo, I was 'inspired' by three other pictures and had to take time to write three other poems before I could get this one posted !  Glad to know the effort was worth it. Thank you for noticing ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Marge, I can feel the love so strong, the memory forever imprinted. Wonderful poem. Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
It's always so nice to recall fond memories...beautifully done... hugs to you..  Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ To feel is forever~ Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this one. GreenEyes~ Yeah .... real nice. Thank you, sweet friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You knew I'd love this one, didn't you? *S* Stranding me in soft remember A place I never want to leave unless it's to make new memories with the one remembered most softly. *S* Beautiful! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernGal~ Yeah ... I'd have bet the farm on it ! I know just what you mean ... about that soft remember~ just doesn't get much better than that ... Big ole HUGS for a super lady ! Thank you, sweetie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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