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Death
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since 2001-05-26
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Twilight

0 posted 2001-05-26 04:17 AM


My Friend

Tells me so much
I work so hard
   yet you hate
Me
   Removing your pain

You call to me
   in spittling agony
      and I come
        to free you

My friend knows of freedom
    he says you fight for it
       that no sacrifice is too small

And I trust him
   Human as he is
      for no fear ever
        crossed his face
Since I met him as an infant
            wavering

I bring Peace
   release
     I remove
    every cancerous
       sore

Who amongst you
   can or would do more

Soon so soon I pass myself
      rest peacefully
       the one chosen
Is the most compassionate of All

  

© Copyright 2001 AKA Donovan A. Doyle - All Rights Reserved
latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

1 posted 2001-05-26 04:27 AM


Rest well, a new day is here.Let us greet her with open arms.

My faith is but the size my mustard seed. I'll turn the other cheek in my love for mankind - not pride.

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
2 posted 2001-05-26 04:30 AM


Welcome to passions, and you have made a wonderful entrance. well done.

Charisma

Death
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Twilight
3 posted 2001-05-26 04:56 AM


Rest I do not know.

An entrance, I am known for those.

But not in jet black cloaks

Nor am I bones without skin, I am no skeleteon, except within. I am simply, my friend says, "remover of pain"

I seek to ease, the ways of life,I have never destroyed, torn in heaps the bodies you for me, you think I cannot cry?

This job ends soon for me. As I said my replacement is the most caring of all people I could find.

A moment in a sphere unkown yet home, to those I come to lift. I am near gone, yet always present. My friend, gave me this gift, of what he calls "A Moment."

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-05-26 07:44 AM


Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2001-05-26 11:29 AM


Welcome to the family!! Odd name you've chosen, but then, what's in a name? LOL

Poeminister
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6 posted 2001-05-26 01:28 PM


Excellent expressive piece.  Well done.  And Welcome to passions!
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