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xJrOnEx
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0 posted 2001-05-01 09:51 AM



Within You Remain

Thoughts rush through my mind
Of faded feelings lost in time
The moments we spent together
Thinking this will be forever
The good and bad times we shared
The hopes and dreams we dared
We searched for love in one another
And found peace within each other

Distant Love

Strangers only by name
Their destiny is one and the same
As blind as fate may be
What’s meant to be is meant to be
Never let your heart go astray
Cause true love will find its way
Two souls miles a part
Only by distance not by heart

© Copyright 2001 xJrOnEx - All Rights Reserved
Robulus
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1 posted 2001-05-01 11:24 AM


If only it could but then again what would we write about!?!
- I liked it
Keep it up (0:.
Rob

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-05-01 11:25 AM


Welcome to Passions!
latin passion
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3 posted 2001-05-01 12:00 PM


All I have to do is dream....any time night or day. LP
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4 posted 2001-05-01 12:27 PM


Very nice.  Yes, love seems to be the prevailing theme here.  Joyce
Cuddlez
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5 posted 2001-05-01 01:51 PM


Well
Love can bring out the strongest of emotions...

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2001-05-01 01:52 PM


i think can be so easy o yuh. Welcome to Passions !
suthern
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7 posted 2001-05-01 01:56 PM


Excellent entrance to Passions... Welcome!
latin passion
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8 posted 2001-05-01 02:04 PM


bravo, bravo.... pulled the heartstring.
vandana
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9 posted 2001-05-01 02:17 PM


welcome to passions like this
DawnG
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10 posted 2001-05-01 08:56 PM


If only love was as simple as poetry. Great writing and welcome to Passions. Hope you like it here.

                                  Dawn

Sven
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11 posted 2001-05-01 08:58 PM


I wish that it could be. . .

welcome. . . hope to see more from you. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tiersdin
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12 posted 2001-05-03 09:17 AM


W*E*L*C*O*M*E* To Passions, xJrONex!

Loved this beautifully written poem, looking forward to more...

~Tier

nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2001-05-03 11:58 AM


Distant Love can be very beautiful and made even more so when in front of you...

loved it

~Wynter/M

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



2dalimit
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14 posted 2001-05-03 12:13 PM


I like this very, very much. Welcome to Passions. And don't be a stranger.
Melton

Janet Marie
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15 posted 2001-05-03 05:46 PM


Two souls miles a part
Only by distance not by heart
======================

Welcome to Poetry Land...
these are well expressed and have great cadence...
If Love was easy..we would take it for granted...
nice to meet you, I look forward to more of your work
take care
jm

I miss you so much I cant stand it
Seems like my heart is breaking in two
My head says no, but my soul demands it
Everything I do reminds me of you

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