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Quiet Parade
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Quiet Parade |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Quiet Parade Your love, attention body, mind hope, laughter tears, time You gave me all you had to give it’s just that I’d failed to anticipate there might be some limit to your patience I look back to find I tried it endlessly insecurity inhabiting places where before confidence had been But that’s knowing what I know now then I thought that we would move from love the passion to love the decision we didn’t all that’s left of all you gave me a hair tie, an empty cigarette pack from when you still smoked every poem you ever wrote me every memory we ever made yet more what here at this moment endures is not something you gave me but something you inspired me back towards a passion, yes, but this for words it’s for that I thank you here in a quiet parade I share a moment you made possible with gratitude and love |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
For she does - passion does desire, painting the words comes, but in what form? Don't give up, This Spanish Passion, love gives her love freely to her soul mate. If a decision is needed, a gentle pull may is what she needs. Have patience, talk with her, as well to listen to each others needs. LP He is my pen, I am but the paper he |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
This is a very sweet tribute to whomever it is for. A very poetic way to show your gratitude. enjoyed it very much. *JOE* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've given me some inspiration...for words... well done... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I thought we would move from love the passion to love the decision." I believe you are talking about the way love builds...like putting a puzzle together...piece by piece...James |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
My goodness, but this was so very excellent -I love the acknowledgement of awakening, grateful for the gift no matter how brief, memories linger. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
JLR- I'm even thankful that your special someone inspired you to write. It's a wonderful legacy and very well done in your part. |
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